On Tuesday my class and I we were using (ING) in some of our words and we had to start the writing and mainly I thought it was cool as you can see if you go down on my blog you can see I love writing I used to much of that dangerous writing prompt my teacher Miss D thinks I should be an writing author when I grow up.
I don't want to show you my writing I wanna talk to you for a little bit so...... I we had to make a fiction story my one was going to be about vampires but my brain wasn't working so hard like I normally do so I changed it to zombies.
It was kinda hard for me cause my brain isn't working right now so I only wrote a tiny one sorry so enough talking we should probaly get to the source of my writing my story by the way cause my brain ain't working I added something really cute for little kids POWERS in my story yeah...
Anyways...
I started sniffling my legs shaking like an earthquake
I opened the door trying not to make a sound the
door started creaking I could hear the crasping
from the zombies OOPS I tripped over a rock and
started tumbling
“AAH HELP SOMEONE I DON’T WANNA DIE
I’M TO YOUNG TO DIE!!!”
“Uuuughhhh” I heard the zombies screaming.
A wall is in front of me I can’t run anywhere
“Oh no no no no!” I was screaming in fear
“This can’t be, guess I’ll have to use my
shadow shape shifting powers”I was saying
turning into a zombie.
Zombies start slumping their bodies to the wall
“Uuughhhhh”I said trying to act like a zombie.
After that the zombies had found out
I’m not a zombie and they start CHASING ME!!!
“GREAT NOW MY POWERS AREN’T
WORKING GREAT AS THEY USED TO”
I SAID JUMPING over the zombies
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Hello Harmony i like your writing it's cool
ReplyDeleteform Brianna
Hi Brianna,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the nice comment I KNOW MY WRITING IS COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!