AMAZING!~ Show Don't Tell Writing

Hey Whats Up Readers,

In my class we have been learning to switch writing of our show don't tell. On a table we had to describe some emotions and don't say what the emotion is and it took me about two days to finish it and here it is.

SHOW	Don’t Tell
Brian pursed his lips and clenched his fists into tight balls. Try as he might he could not contain himself. Within seconds he erupted like a volcano.	Brian was angry. He started to yell.
An ache started deep in his stomach. He turned away as his eyes welled up with tears.	Johnny felt sad.
Bailey came out of her class room with a gigantic smile on her face. She started to jump and laugh.	Bailey was happy.
Jeremy had just hoped off the bus. To hear his parents screaming at each other he just froze.	Jeremy was shocked.
Tama was jumping up and down yelling with joy.	Tama was excited by the rugby match he wa s playing in that afternoon.

Could you try do this without saying the emotions...

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For My Topic AMAZING ARTS/DANCE/DRAMA!

Yo What's Up Readers,

For my topic we have been doing art, dance and drama currently we have been doing dance and we had to make a drawing and find out some dancing songs. 

We had to write down what we want wanted to learn about dance and we had to write it down after we did that we also had to make a poster to show.

It took me for at least two to three days and now I have finally finished and ready to show you my poster and my list of songs.

Somos Ono. IN SPAINSH

No Tengo Miedo De Amar. IN SPAINSH

NO TU NO.IN SPAINSH

Siempre Van A Hablar

Please have a look at the dance songs and...

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AMAZING DESCRIBING WRITING

Good Afternoon And Welcome Back To My blog, 

So for writing we have been learning to describe a picture from an image on google.

We had to use the five senses to describe our writing. 
The five senses are Hear See Touch Feel Taste and your Emotions


1.The Thunder From All The Way From The Shore Had Been Very Loud.
2.Distancing Thunder Along With The Shore Splashing It's Waves.
3.My Dried And Cracked Lips Had Been Made From Being Dehydrated.
4.My Fists Clenched Trying To Hold In My Deepest Fears.
5.The Thunder Was Frightening In The Space Between Me And It's Burning Arm.

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Shared Lunch On Wednesday

Good Afternoon Readers,


On the 3rd of July my school is holding a shared lunch where we bringing along healthy but yummy food.

Some family's like to bring along food to our shared lunch Sushi,Sandwiches,Cracker,Chips,Muffins/Cupcakes,Apples,Oranges,Grapes,Strawberry's,Pear,Pineapples,Kiwi Fruit,Watermelon and banana's its going to be very yummy.

I am bringing muffins instead of spring rolls this year cuz my grandma is going to an hospital appointment and she might be a little late after her hospital appointment.

She might not have enough time to make the spring rolls and she might be a bit tired, some of my friends said they were bringing Sushi, in my own opinion my school we like to bring Sushi alot.

Every year in my school we have Sushi in our shared lunch my B.F.F/Best,Friend,Forever always brings Sushi so that might be the reason why it is so popular in my school

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Weekly Word:Fragance

Hello Readers,

I am learning about new words.My new word is Fragance I had to look on https://www.vocabulary.com/ to find what it means and I read what the example was and here is my poster.

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MY NEW AMAZING HOGWARTS PAJAMA

Hello Readers,

Two weeks ago my dad asked me and my sibling "Girls you have a choice you can go to the movies, or I can bye onesises for each of you's.

 Me and my siblings agreed we wanted to get onesies later that day after school we went to the warehouse in Rolleston.

After that I saw the onesie it was a Hogwarts onesies and my dad payed for it and we went home we slept and when I got to me grandmas house I mad a drawing to show you amazing readers here it is
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