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So for writing we have been learning to describe a picture from an image on google.
We had to use the five senses to describe our writing.
The five senses are Hear See Touch Feel Taste and your Emotions
1.The Thunder From All The Way From The Shore Had Been Very Loud.
2.Distancing Thunder Along With The Shore Splashing It's Waves.
3.My Dried And Cracked Lips Had Been Made From Being Dehydrated.
4.My Fists Clenched Trying To Hold In My Deepest Fears.
5.The Thunder Was Frightening In The Space Between Me And It's Burning Arm.
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Saturday 27 July 2019
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hi Harmony
ReplyDeleteI like your writing it is cool
I hope you like my Comet