In my writing class we have been learning about short sentences my sentences aren't really good so i'm going to show you but don't say I didn't say so
On Sunday He Ran Away
He Was Upset
On my birthday
He ran on the lawn
At school
He cried at school
At Basketball
He ran to a side
Those are my sentences and yeah we have some kinda words that I have to explain I just wanted to put this in so yeah the words are W-start
Where-When-While-Whilst
Where:In or to what place or position
When:At what time
While:During Which
Whilst:Whenever you are in doubt
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Kia ora Harmony, it's good to see that you have taken the time to complete your work and post it on your blog. As you know it is ok to post work that you haven't finished or that you know you haven't quite had time to make it as perfect as you want it to be. You have explained the task well and written a variety of sentences. If you add the W words (or synonyms for them) at the beginning of the sentences then they will be W sentences. For example: "When he was at school, he cried". Give it a try!
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