On Monday we started to restart our own student HotSpot Doc and do a hundred word challenge it was amazing being able to do it I obviously got more than 100 words cause I LOVE WRITING and we had to put words in our writing they were but I used all of them as you see I ticked them off and because I showed you that I definitely have to show you the rest of my HotSpot
And Here It Is:
Strong words that you must include:
- Blustery✔️
- Exquisite
- Fragile✔️
- Disillusioned✔️
My shoes were soaked and the rain wouldn’t stop. A grey car I didn’t recognise pulled up beside me. I could feel my body becoming more fragile as I looked at the exquisite grey car.
I was becoming disillusioned. The man walked out of the car and he looked straight at me as the blustery wind hit my face “GET IN MY CAR NOW!!!” “NO!!!” I said. He had started chasing me.
I tried to run away but my bag was too heavy for me I tripped but I got back up and I dropped my bag to help me run better soon I lost the man in the ally way.
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